The Train Reached Its Station

This is the story of young and dynamic Abhi.

He is very ambitious and takes his studies very seriously. His dedication towards his studies and hard work fetch him a seat in a renowned engineering college. But he has to leave his home and stay in a hostel in a different city to pursue his dream of becoming an engineer.

He is in his second year of engineering now and it is the day when his exams are ending. He is very much eager to finish his paper as he needs to rush to the railway station to take the evening train to his hometown. He fished his papers and reached hostel to take his backpack and rushed to the railway station. The train is waiting for departure in the platform. Abhi took out his ticket and checked for his reservation. He boarded the train and settled in his seat.

As the train started Abhi did not even have the idea that it will be a start of something new something special for him. His path crossed the path of a girl in the same compartment and he could not help looking at her. His heart, mind, and soul just want to get a glimpse of the girl every now and then. He has never felt this sort of emotion and restlessness before. Abhi started to think is this Love at First Sight. Every now and then he tries to take a glimpse of the girl in excuse of going to the restroom. He never counted how many times he has taken trips to the restroom. That night is like the longest night in his life. He could not sleep for the entire night.

In the morning, Abhi gets down from his berth and quickly heads towards the seat of the girl. He made up his mind at night that he would talk to the girl first thing in the morning. But where is she? Abhi cannot see any trace of the girl and he felt heartbroken. He thinks she is the first girl who touched his heart in the first instance and he could not take this forward. The train reaches the station of Abhi’s hometown and he reaches home.

It is the final semester of Abhi’s engineering exam. But he has already received a very good offer from one of the MNCs in the campus interview and he is going to join as the intern there till his final result is out. He finishes his exams and joined the job. He started liking the job and getting to learn many things. Abhi’s final exam result is out and he has scored good marks. His job is confirmed and he feels himself as settled in a job.

Two years have passed in the job and Abhi is doing pretty good. His parents are now pressurizing him to get married soon since he is well-settled in his job. He somehow managed to dribble his parents’ talks about marriage as he still has that girl in the train in his mind and he still could not get out of her thoughts. After some days of avoiding the conversation, he could not manage more. Abhi’s parents have given a photo of the prospective bride to him to take a look couple of days back. He had not taken a look at it yet. Now that he has no choice left but to get married he takes the photo out and he is awestruck seeing the photo. He could not believe his eyes what he is seeing. It is the photo of the girl whom he saw two years back in the train. Tears roll down from his eyes. These are the tears of joy and he never thought that his first love would come to him like this. He agrees to the marriage proposal and the train reaches its station.

This is my first post in the fiction genre and I take pride to mention that it is by my wife Manasi. She has written this short fiction story in Bengali and narrated to me. I liked this short story and asked if I can translate the piece and post it on my blog as a part of #MyFriendAlexa campaign post. She agreed to this and here I narrated the story. Hope you liked it.

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12 thoughts on “The Train Reached Its Station”

  1. This is so adorable and yes the story is really nice and sweet. The reveal had me in goosebumps but somewhere inside I knew this is going to happen 🙂 We have become so predictable, no? 🙂

    1. Thanks Ashwini for your kind words 🙂
      Am glad you liked it… I should convey this to the actual creator of the story 🙂
      You are right… we somewhere somehow become so predictable 🙂

    1. Thank you so much Anu for your kind words. Am glad you liked it 🙂
      I’ll convey your message to her for sure!! She wrote this in Bengali; I thought of translating and sharing it on my blog, with her consent 😉

    1. Thanks Shalini for your words… Am glad that you liked it 🙂
      I’m not much into fiction 🙁 Have not tried that actually!! But will convey your message to the actual curator of the story, my wife 🙂

  2. Such a lovely tale. I send my hugs to ur wife. Though i predicted the end, it sometimes feels good to hope for a happy ending when in reality it is an oasis in dessert! It was a feel good read Shamik. I adore u that u decided to post it 🙂

    1. Thank you so much Keerthi for your kind words 🙂 I’m glad you liked the tale!!
      I’ll convey your message to my wife and should encourage her to write more 🙂

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